“Our job is to work with the students,” said tutor Angelica Blazina, “not to do the work for them.”
The room is off-white; every nook and cranny of the space available is used for desks, chairs, or computers. At the front of the room, just a few feet ahead of the entrance, is the desk where I was promptly greeted. Even late at night the the room is buzzing with activity. This is the
“I’m taking it for English,” said Tracy Raysor, a sophomore who has been coming to the
The
“We’ve had papers from science, literature, math,” said long-time tutor and supervisor Kennesha Barnwell, surrounded by other long time tutors Angelica and Roxanne Sejarto, who’ve worked there for about seven years, among others. “Yes, we’ve had math papers. I don’t know why we’ve had math papers, it was rare, but we get papers from math.”
Day to day students generally walk in, either taking any tutor available.
Over time some begin to schedule appointments with those favored tutors. But during certain academic “seasons” of the year, walk-ins find there are less tutors available, and competitive reservations may begin.
During the times of the Cuny Proficiency Exam, mid-terms, and finals, the tutors find themselves with more students and appointments than they can handle. “We’ve had over a thousand students come in for individual appointments. And for the workshops we have seven workshops a day, full with 30 people, 40 people…” said Kennesha, shaking her head as she leaned back in her seat. “It’s absolutely impossible because the CPE, the exam, is happening now, but during testing time, mid-terms, and finals we’re always swamped…and we have less funding and less staff [than before]…”
“Most people walk in, but some are powerhouse workshops, like the CPE, so people want to register to reserve a seat,” added Zully.
But still the tutors work with great proficiency, a literary version of Spartans tackling an overwhelming workload and still making it through stronger than ever. Tutors themselves are hand-picked by and go through a long path to becoming a full tutor. “It’s based on recommendation,” Zully comments as she assists an outgoing student setting up her next appointment, “[then] you have to take a year course before you’re allowed to teach and tutor.” Finishing with her student, she turns and folds her legs in her chair. “There’re two courses; varying types of grammar, varying types of teaching skills, and public speech. It’s pretty, pretty intense.” These courses are not open to any student either, but reserved for the tutors through ‘independent study’, which earns credit and can work towards an English Honors.
Later, tutors receive addition training. “Everyone is training to work in every discipline; tutors in training are not allowed to teach the CPEs; very rarely will anyone see a tutor in training teaching; since they’re in training they’ll really be observing.”
But tutors aren’t just glorified students with a knack for writing and simple patience. Many are graduates, and, according to Kennesha, “more than half of the permanent staff have a Masters Degree, or is working towards one.” Some have even gone into teaching, like Angelica, who began teaching at John Jay this semester as a Professor. The transition from student to tutor is smooth, according to the tutors, and Roxanne adds “you feel good, coming full circle.”
But it also doesn’t make it any easier when dealing with troublesome students. “When I first became a tutor, I guess I was a little naïve,” said Angelica, wearing an embarrassed blush while in thought of a past student. “I was a little too nice and she started coming with big piles of research, to leave them for me to read, so I could tell her what I read and tell her what she should read.”
“Students need to know we’re not doing their work,” added Kennesha firmly. “: “Students come in here and they think we’re being mean and assume we’re being lazy and we don’t want to do our work and why we’re repelling them, it’s because we’re not in charge of interpretation, the process you bring to us is the final product. We can help you enhance it and make it better but it’s still up to you to interpret your assignment. It’s your work. We can’t write it for you.”
It doesn’t end there either: often, like police officers, the tutors find that they’re never off duty. “Someone hands you a paper at the store and asks you to read it,” Kennesha said with a smile. “Or you’re walking home to the subway and someone hands you a paper because they recognize you.”
“It’s
But all of the tutors gathered agree on one thing. “When you get a student in here and they want to improve, they’re the best you can get,” said Kennesha. “When you get students who come in and say ‘I don’t want to be here,’ it’s just horrible. It can make an hour session feel like forever.”
“To have a student come back and say thank you for the help, it always makes you feel good,” added Roxanne.
“I had one at graduation,” relates Kennesha with a smile as her eyes wandered up to the ceiling, “who dragged me to meet her mom and dad and grandmother…and her mom said ‘you’ve helped her so much’, and I was like ‘oh my god, I feel so happy!’”
At the end of the day, through the long workloads and difficult sessions, the group seems to draw it’s energy from each other. As some tutors head home, many hug or kiss cheek to cheek farewells, saying goodbye until the next day.
“I’ve met some of my best friends from this staff,” Roxanne said excitedly, beaming a grin to her friends.
“We’re all enjoying our time together because it’s a great group of people to work with,” said Kennesha. “We’re definitely family.”

6 comments:
I think you should have combined the quote instead of breaking it apart, I think that's usually only used for when a person ends a sentence. For example "Our job is to work with the students, not to do the work for them," said Angelica Blazina a tutor [at the writing center?]
I love your second paragraph I can actually close my eyes and see a students at the desk ready to see if I had an appointment. But I think you should take out the part where you say "where I was promptly greeted. I think you should just mention the front desk is where students are greeted. All I would add is the introduction of people you quoted, I know that my biggest problem, but I can see it seems like a person popping out of nowhere and giving their opinion.
I really enjoyed your lead because it really sets up the story. The quotes that you did pick were able to show how much the tutors were happy when they taught a student and how irritated they were when they realize a student was just using them. The only problem I had with some of the them as that they sound too similar.
For example, I felt that the quote “To have a student come back and say thank you for the help, it always makes you feel good,” added Roxanne. was unnecessary because the next quote shows how excited the tutor Roxanne was .
The tutor must have trouble with handling the job and school work too, if you have a quote that covers that aspect then you should place it among the tutors other problems.
I enjoyed the closing so keep it.
Your story was great. It was well written, well structured, and very detailed. It offered the side of the story from the tutors. Your lead was good and you started out strong, but you should have mentioned you are writing about the writing center in your lead. However, don't use "I" in your story. You are writing about what you observed, not about what happened to you. The quotes you used flowed great in your story, however, I would have liked it if you described the tutors. Moreover, you need to work a little on your grammar. You should work on sentence structure, word form, and punctuation marks. Overall, your story had a lot of details that made your story rich and interesting and funny to read.
I think you need to rework the statement about the Writing Center isn't only for english. I believe you meant english majors but on the off chance that you didn't, you might want to consider that all writing, reading and grammar goes under the title of english.
Also, i might be wrong here but i thought the goal was to shoot for 600 to 800 words i think you have more than 1000.
Good work Masoud. You can get away with the "I," for this story . . . because I think it's appropriate in terms of the story's tone.
BUT what's with all the ". . ." you can't really do this in journalism. Are you trimming what's in the middle? Or are you trying to indicate a pause? As I've done it above, it's for a pause, and not appropriate in a story. Traditionally, ". . ." indicates that you've cut something.
Try not to include too much info. about sources between quotes. Put it in its own sentence. And break quotes ONLY where it's grammatically correct to do so. See handout from last semester. Or your textbook.
Good work regarding the description. Enough, but not too much.
Jenn's comment RE: ENGLISH is good. Fix accordingly. But don't worry about the word count for now.
DH
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